Saturday, January 19, 2013

WAITING FOR TWILIGHT


I passed on sleeping in an icy tent four nights running to see the midnight opening of this final movie of the Twilight series I've  loved. To be frank, I couldn't have stayed awake. I hit the first showing the second day, and the film didn't disappoint. The audience broke into applause when it was over. I didn't want it to end.

The incredible imaginations and storytelling skills of Stephanie Myer's Twilight saga--and Charlaine Harris's Sookie Stackhouse books--ignited an urgent need in me to create my own living dead hero.

I hadn't planned on writing a vampire story, but I'd committed to writing a novella set somewhere in Italy. In tossing around ideas for a title, Night Train--an old rhythm and blues song from long before my time--popped up in my head. Night Train to Naples came about because of its alliteration. Now I had to decide who would be on that train to Naples...and why.

My characters never clamor to have their story told. I see them. As I pondered my story, my mind filled with a vision of Alexandros Nicolaides--a tall, strong, Greek vrykolakas, his long blond hair streaming, the emerald of his eyes deepened by the experience of seven hundred years of being undead.

...Alex boarded the night train to Naples in Rome and chose a seat at the back of the car facing the door. To help hide his pale face, he pulled the collar of his suit jacket up before settling into the humming, slick sway of the brightly colored train, feeling satisfied at how yesterday had gone. After successfully delivering a grouping of matched diamonds and a remarkable ruby spinel to a new customer in Lyons, he'd flown to Rome today on the company plane...

There he is--my Greek vamp, who lives in contemporary times. Because I love gems and precious stones, he's a gemologist and a diamond courier. Intended as a standalone, the story evolved into the Night Train paperback series collection.

At the time I was developing the first story, Amber Allure author Christiane France told me she had no interest in weaving a tale of the living dead. "Anyway, I don't know the rules for writing them."

Oops. If there were rules for what the mythological creatures we call vampires, vrykolakas or the Romanian strigoi are like, I needed to research this before I wrote another word.

The historical picture shows mankind as fearful and superstitious. Every culture has had a demon or spirit that sustains its life by sucking  the "essence" out of a person, usually by drinking their blood or sucking out their soul. The creatures have similarities, but differences, too. In the Western world, gothic horror films and books depict vampires as blood-thirsty murderers. They include fanged male and female undead beings whose images can't be captured on film or reflected in a mirror. Only decapitation, fire, sunlight, silver or wooden stakes kill them. Displaying the cross of Christ in the face of this evil can't protect you, but garlic or waving branches of wild rose or hawthorn can. (Go figure.)

It was only in the early seventeen hundreds that records in southeastern Europe detailed the folkloric fear that the dead could return as revenants--a result of witches, suicide, evil beings invading the body, or the bite of a vampire. Mass hysteria resulted in weird and gross treatments of corpses to prevent this. Suspected revenants were executed in public.

John Polidori coined the word vampire with his 1819 book, The Vampyre; A Tale. He was Lord Byron's physician, and three years earlier the two of them had joined Percy Shelley, Mary Shelley (of Frankenstein fame) and Claire Claremont, the mother of Bryon's daughter Allegra in Geneva. Shut indoors by rainy weather, they spent the days spinning horror tales. Polidori's book emerged from this setting. Lord Ruthven, his vampire, is charismatic and suave, reminiscent of what we'd call a serial sociopath today. The killings aren't graphic. The story meanders, but what can you expect from something written two hundred years ago? (It's free on Kindle.)

Many of today's stereotypes about vampires--such as fangs--began in 1846 with Varney the Vampire; or, The Feast of Blood. This is a Victorian penny dreadful series later published in book form by James Malcolm Rymer.  It's $1.99 on Kindle, but I didn't buy it because the only review rates it "boring, boring, boring."

Fifty years later, Irishman Bram Stoker's famous Dracula drew on Victorian werewolf and demon lore to voice the "anxieties of an age" and spawn the horror genre. It fits in the vampire, gothic, horror and invasion literature categories.

In our time, queen of the horror genre Anne Rice's Interview with a Vampire, the first book in The Vampire Chronicles, was released in 1976. Long before I'd imagined writing about them, or had even heard of Anne Rice and what she wrote, I saw this 1994 film. I went only because it starred Tom Cruise, Antonio Banderas, Brad Pitt and Christian Slater. It scared me spitless. I rushed out to the lobby to recover, then forced myself to return to see how it ended--rather depressingly, I might add. Later, I slogged through eighteen CDs of the Chronicles's richly woven Blackwood Farm. It was right out of my nightmares, and depressed me even more. I am obviously too timid for tales of horror. Rice's vampires follow the traditional trend, but the deeper message is to turn from evil to God. 

Vampires are not real. They were spawned in the minds of writers. Fortunately, the wonderfully imaginative Meyers and Harris have shown us we can alter the historical picture and disregard any rules about their nature.

Charlaine Harris's Stackhouse series vamps have come out. They live openly among humans in southern Louisiana, can be seen in a mirror and photgraphed. Per tradition, they sleep only during the day because sunlight is deadly. Silver can burn and even small exposures are toxic over time. Stakes and knives can destroy them. Only the rogues murder humans and drink their blood. The others drink synthetic or "true blood" (thus the name of the HBO series) donated by humans.

Twilight's vampires live secretly among humans. Some avoid the gothic horror of ripping out human throats by confining themselves to a quick, merciful kill to slake the blood of big game animals. They never sleep because they never tire. They avoid sunlight because their skin sparkles like diamonds in it. Humans seeing that effect would know what they were. The discovery would incite vampire hunts to rival those of the seventeenth century.

This is Romeo and Juliet with a twist--its teenage lovers marry and live happily ever after, thus freeing Romance writers from old dark stereotypes. Another vampire "rule" has bitten the dust. 

It was important in crafting my three Night Train novellas that the vampires be my vampires, not those of someone else. I chose the traits I wanted from the stereotypes and added new ones of my own.

If you're interested in writing about vampires, my advice is to forget about "rules." They don't exist. As long as you make your vamps believable, they may be anything you wish them to be.

Just go for it.

Carolina Valdez
http://www.CarolinaValdez
http://www.twitter.com/carolina_valdez
NIGHT TRAIN - available now http://www.amberquill.com/AmberAllure/NightTrain.html

FOR A CHANCE TO WIN a trade paperback copy of my gay erotic NIGHT TRAIN stories, leave a comment here with your email address. A winner will be selected on January 31st.

ASHLEY WON THE COPY OF NIGHT TRAIN. CONGRATULATIONS! 












 

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21 Comments:

Blogger Loveless3173 said...

Ooh~ I absolutely loved the post!
It was very interesting, but OMFG, I totally agree!! The last Twilight movie was just... AMAZING! I went to see it 3 times and I'm still not satisfied. I really hope It comes to DVD as SOON as possible!! lol...
And true blood... oh yeah~ haha! I really look forward to reading your take on vampires!
Please count me in! :D

Judi
arella3173_loveless@yahoo(dot)com

2:04 AM  
Blogger Debby said...

Great post. Love your ending advice. There really are no rules that must be followed as long as you are consistent and believable.
debby236 at gmail dot com

5:16 AM  
Blogger Romance Reader Enthusiast said...

I have taken short train rides and never one where I get to sleep on the train or travel at night. I think I've been missing out. I look forward to reading your book.

I hope 2013 is a great year for you,
Lynn
lareynolds0316@gmail.com

9:02 AM  
Blogger binabug said...

thanks for the chance, would love to read it, if its ebook I have a sony ereader (just got so not too sure what/how to use it yet)
sabina dot edwards at gmail dot com

12:17 PM  
Blogger Barbra said...

Really enjoyed your blog. Please
put my name in the hat. Thanks! :)

Barbra
aelnova@aol.com

2:35 PM  
Blogger Dakota Trace said...

That's very sound advice, and I think that it could apply to almost any paranormal creature. I like to write werewolves but I've made them my werewolves. Good luck with your books. Your night train series sounds good. I may just have to go out and by it - if I don't win it...lol

Dakota

dakotatrace@gmail.com

5:01 PM  
Blogger Carolina Valdez said...

Hi, Judi!

I pre-ordered this DVD on Amazon today. It's due out 03/03/13. Didn't you love the ending of the first half of this movie? You'd have had to read the book to get it about her eyes. Great creativity.

Hello, Debby!

I'm happy you agree. Great minds and all that, you know. LOL

Hey, there, Lynn:

I rode from San Diego to the University of Illinois once. Slept in a chair. That's a back killer.

All the trains in these stories are real. I had to fly Dante from Rome to Baton Rouge to catch a night train to New Orleans. Louis Armstrong International Airport is in Kenner, and no night train to New Orleans.

I happened on a PBS special featuring the actor who played Hercule Poirot in Agatha Christie's "Murder on the Orient Express." He traveled from Rome to Istanbul, with a stop in Venice! Same historic train now restored.

I have no idea what I would've done if I hadn't discovered these trains.

Sabina:

This is a trade paperback. You can purchase the individual novellas as downloads, but this offer is for the paperback with all three novellas in it.

Barbra:

Yes, your name is in the hat... along with those of Sabina, Lynn, Debby, and Judi.

Thanks for the comments,
Carolina

5:12 PM  
Anonymous Barbara Clark said...

I enjoyed your insights into the vampire legend, and the accompanying research. It's alway nice to get a glimpse of the inner workings of an author's mind while developing a story.

Barbara C.

5:55 PM  
Blogger Carolina Valdez said...

Hi, Dakota:

Nice to have you on my entry list! I wish I could give everyone a free copy, but only one can win.

Making a character yours is the challenge, isn't it? That and making the unreal, real.

Best wishes in your writing,
Carolina

6:11 PM  
Blogger Carolina Valdez said...

Hello, Barbara!

For those who don't know, Barbara is an award winning Amber Quill Press author, too. She's had an interesting life, which you can read about at http://www.amberquill.com/bio_Clark.html

Like you, Barbara, I enjoy knowing how other writers get their ideas and learn from their research.

Carolina

6:26 PM  
Blogger stacey said...

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12:44 PM  
Blogger stacey said...

I so love finding out how each Author will come up with their type of vampire instead of doing what all the others are saying a vampire should be!

sasluvbooks at yahoo

12:45 PM  
Blogger Carolina Valdez said...

Hello, Stacey:

And since authors love sharing their process with others, we're happy when someone takes time to read how we work.

Appreciate the comment. You're on the entry list for a chance at the book.

Carolina
P.S. I'm assuming you are at yahoo.com rather than yahoo.ca (Canada)

2:22 PM  
Blogger Pommawolf Emeraldwolfeyes said...

Your a new author to me, and your post intriqued me. I love reading paranormal romance. After reading many vampire stories, but many if them become predictable after awhile. I love stories that have unique premises, and are not a standard copy cat reflection from other stories.
Your series sounds wonderful, and I look forward to reading them in the future ...*S* The covers are wonderful!
Thank you for the contest giveaway!

Darcy
pommawolf @hotmail.com

5:48 PM  
Blogger Anne said...

I read, but am not a fan of Meyer's books. They were just ok to me. I do plan to have a Twlight movie weekend one of these days.

I did enjoy the original Dracula by Stoker and I LOVE Charlaine Harris' series. The show, True Blood, I can appreciate for it's over the top campishness as long as I don't compare it to the books.

Why did you choose a train setting for your vamp series?

acm05atjuno.com

9:56 AM  
Blogger Carolina Valdez said...

Welcome, Darcy:

It's always a bright spot in my day when I get a new reader. And, yes, I love Trace Edward Zaber's covers, too. He does all of them for the books at Amber Quill Press.

I have you down as an entrant.

Carolina

10:40 AM  
Blogger Carolina Valdez said...

Hi, Anne:

I bought the first True Blood season, and was shocked when it opened with the naked brother having sex standing up with a naked woman.(Mind you, this was prior to a Brit royal prince in Vegas.) I laughed and said to myself, "Well, it's HBO, you know."

I may write scenes like that, but to see one for real in living color wasn't my cup of tea. I stopped watching the show because the book was too vivid in my mind and I didn't enjoy the changes. Nice that you could see it in a different light and enjoy it.

As I wrote in the blog, I liked the old song Night Train, with its slowly unfolding rhythm. After settling on Night Train To Naples, I had to figure out WHO would be on a night train. Maybe my need to create my first vampire was what told me a creature of the night would be on it. Vamps can't travel during the day.

This was the first instance of unconsciously accepting the trope that vampires are creatures of the night.

I've added you to the list. Have a great week,
Carolina

11:02 AM  
Blogger Kenn Dahll said...

I really liked the beginning of your blog - the discussion of how an alliterative idea blossomed into a full story. My books evolve like that sometimes. Those are usually my favorite.

Kenn Dahll
kdahll69@hotmail.com

3:29 PM  
Blogger Ashley Applebee said...

Awesome post! I loved the advice at the end. I tried writing about vampires, but I was always worried I had them "wrong" know what I mean? Now I can just make my own vampires :) I love the ideas of your stories! I would love to read about your vampires :)
Thanks for the great giveaway!
Ashley A
ash_app@hotmail.com

8:18 PM  
Blogger Carolina Valdez said...

Good for you, Ashley! Now you know there is no "wrong."

Best wishes on your writing. I have you down for the contest.

Carolina

9:41 PM  
Blogger Carolina Valdez said...

Hello, Kenn:

Actually, I don't think about this sort of thing until I write a blog like this on how it all came together step by step. And, yes, it's fun and satisfying.

I see you have many publications. Glad you had the courage to submit and found an outlook for your work.

Good luck in the contest.

Carolina

10:04 PM  

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